On my birthday 14th november 2006 …i look back and reflect my mission and my future dream… I would like to share my 1st ever poem which still stands as a cult of inspiration for me …. i hope you will love it too
Unrestricted boundaries await….
Unsolved mysteries pend….
Unexplored horizons to realize….
I shall, I can, I will ….
Untie the tangles within myself,
Unmatch the strength of the almighty,
Unleash the metaphor of ecstasy.
And reach the heights of the unattained destny
‘Nu-anse
Thank god, at last I understood some thing. I can only say this much that you are on right track. Keep up your good work and one day you will definitely go beyond the boundaries and explore the newer world. God bless you….
Just..Supppperb….
“Everything we wanted to be, we already are;it is just a matter of reconnecting.”And u started reconnecting.And the boundaries are just 1 feet away from u..Go beyond that.
really good… and full of optimism…. great to ead for a pessimist like me!
Nic! As far as i concern this poem flaunts ur ambitions, disposition & tenacity.But u h’ve a long way to go..No prob. Hold on ur efforts and maintain ur sanguinity.
If u can, U CAN!!
Good one, hope ur all these poetry will convert into a book from blogs…best luck
hi nik..i knww ths poem s easy to understand..bt wish it was a little longerluv ur concepts but..inspirin fr all
nice one bro, keep them coming, u got a natural flow to ur poems
A very belated Happy Birthday! and thanks for your bday wishes to me!
I’m sorry for such a late reply to your comment, but my 21st bday happened right at the same time as Uni exams are approaching (they start on Monday) so I’ve been pretty busy.
Happy 21st again..
Mary
Hell yeah! i would also love to break ma bonds…..fly away and soar high up in the sky….break the boundaries and be free! your poem is xtremely uplifting and optimistic! whenever i feel like quiting i am going to come back and read this poem!-D
simply awesommeeeee!
i like this poem niks, we are here for a reason and we’ill surely explore that one day …. tc
man i am surprised except one no one wished me happy birthday !!