I bumped everywhere but couldn’t do it,
From the right to the left, I tried it all,
Notions kept baffling me all the time,
I struggled to make it to the end
I strived harder, but I failed.
Will I be able to make it there?
Or will have a tuff time later
I shall have to decide promptly
Tension rose as each minute passed by,
There was no sign of it far and wide,
Is it so tuff, I asked my self?
Its just hours away! My mind replied
Find it quickly, my eyes cried,
My head went tumbling with pain and fret,
That night I woke, I tried n tried
I lost my sleep a night I cried,
4 a.m. the clock ticked by,
No signs of sleep, no forty winks,
But soon came the light from the east,
No sun no moon it was my mum,
Sleep you sly! She shrieked high,
But sleep won’t come, no forty winks
That night I woke, I tried n tried
I lost my sleep a night I cried
– Nu-anse

hey nikhil
nice one….
it brings out the inside of u. wat u feel from within. frankly it wasnt that humorous, but wat u feel has come out…
keep up the good work….
cheers
darryl
awesome dude…
specially the 3rd and 5th paragraph….i like the most…i suggest u better make ur profession as a poet…gve ur time, u’ll get everything u want…hahahaaaaaaaa….its really a nice one yaar….u must be thinking i always write ur poem as ur best ever…bt wht shud i say…ur every poem is better than ur previous ones…
such an emotional piece from you? niks! so what the man is turning into?
it does make me feel weird…what were you trying guy?
nice one dude
i have to work really hard to compete u
nice emotional poetry
thanks for the comments guys …. at daryll
debasis-> u make almost made me a wordsworth…
apoorv wat man its a normal poem nothing extraordinary and nothing of the sought u were thinking of it.
peeyush … why compete we have different markets to cater to